Out of nowhere I felt like writing the story which is still in progress but I would like to know what you think about it
Here it is
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Crimean Campaign
"Sich in flames"
As they have approached the proximity of the Sich, Jerzy ordered 20 howtizers to shoot shrapenel at the poorly made fort. With ugly grin and apple tabbacco smoke pumping out of his nostrils he spoke:
-Ahhh back to the old days.
He starved for it as his last years he spend...
Opinion about my story
Here it is
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Crimean Campaign
"Sich in flames"
As they have approached the proximity of the Sich, Jerzy ordered 20 howtizers to shoot shrapenel at the poorly made fort. With ugly grin and apple tabbacco smoke pumping out of his nostrils he spoke:
-Ahhh back to the old days.
He starved for it as his last years he spend...
Opinion about my story